Critique of first animation

The things that I think that I did well is that I incorporated a story into my animation and took it from a first person view. I think that I had a good bit of variety in my scene, but could have improved rhythm. I think that my rhythm was a little off because, I switched in between first person view and third person view, without making it clear to what was happening. Possibly causing some confusion while watching my video. On a creativity scale, my was probably in the middle, some of the other animations that I saw were very outside of the box thinking, making mine seem a little cliche. My wasn’t critiqued, but I believe that my was well done in how that my used multiple camera angles to make emotions come out of the viewers. Some things that I could improve on is that I should do more editing throughout my animation to make it even smoother. I should also make the transition between some of the camera movement more smooth and connected instead of immediately swapping over to the over angle. Things that I should keep in mind is that how I need to connect these camera movements and think how to switch between different perspectives.